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"Winter's Lies" by =Yupik:iconYupik:

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    Summer begins.
    Winter dies.
No onle ives
    In winter's lies

Except for someone
and their
faint short cries

Heard throughout

summer's rays

those faint cries are heard for days
Laying on the floor
of
broken dreams
and
slaughtered hopes.
Winter's lies are made to choke.

No one saves those faint
short cries
and so those cries began to die
Like the end of winter's lies
these faint cries
turn into lies.

Therefore no one
lives in lies
because of those faint short cries
©2008 =Yupik
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No critique. I was...kinda upset. I'm okay now, though.
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!avatarthebest911:iconavatarthebest911: May 8, 2008, 4:00:04 PM Mood: Neutral
i like it

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=sandstorm5490:iconsandstorm5490: May 8, 2008, 5:37:23 PM
A great use of words! Good show!

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~Tibb-Wolf:iconTibb-Wolf: May 8, 2008, 7:43:09 PM
Very amazing Yupik. :D I like it. :)

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=VampireAshez:iconVampireAshez: May 8, 2008, 8:24:15 PM
that's so good O_O

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~imokyoureok:iconimokyoureok: May 8, 2008, 11:36:02 PM
could use a little more notboring loolololololo

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*ARTTTTT:iconARTTTTT: May 9, 2008, 12:48:47 AM
good work!!!(Winter's lies are made to choke).

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what is this! without is?
~SkittleMoonSakura:iconSkittleMoonSakura: May 9, 2008, 5:32:08 PM
it's great

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~xdrummermonkeyx:iconxdrummermonkeyx: May 10, 2008, 10:22:11 AM
coolies.. i like this
:)im glad your ok now

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Fates grasp upon us. Is the only thing that keeps us going.
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